Rewrite the sentences below to make them more concise.

I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention of your drafting officers the dislike of the administrator, Dr. Lomas, towards long sentences and paragraphs in messages to the field and in other items drafted for her signature or approval, as well as in all correspondence, reports, and studies. Please encourage your section to keep their sentences short.

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Answer 1

Explanation:

I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention of your drafting officers the dislike of the administrator. Dr. Lomas has drafted for her signature or approval towards long sentences and paragraphs in messages to the field and in other items. She also did it as well as in all correspondence, reports, and studies.

This is the direct tone that is more concise than the long sentence from your answer. There are three shorter sentences that are considering independent clause.

Answer 2

Please encourage your drafting officers to keep sentences and paragraphs in letters, reports, and studies short. Dr. Lomas, the administrator, has mentioned that reports and memos drafted for her approval recently have been wordy and thus time-consuming.


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BRAINLIEST TO THE FIRST PERSON
In this unit, you have looked at different types of characters in fiction and in drama. Characters are essential to a story because they help move the story forward. Some characters undergo significant changes over the course of the story. Often, the reader may find that a character is easy to relate to. Or the reader may find that a character has qualities that he or she wishes to have.

Choose a character that you enjoyed reading about from a story or a drama. Which character did you choose? Why do you like this character? Can you relate to the character? Explain why. Are there any qualities of the character that you wish you had? If so, explain why you would like to have those qualities. What did you learn from the character? (katniss everdeen)

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Answer:

I chose Katie's Everdeen. I like this character because she is fearless in the face of danger. I can relate to this character from when I was younger and got stuck at the top of the ferris wheel and had to climb down. I did it with no problem when I focused on my goal and not the dangers of my situation. I wish I could be as smart as she was during her situation. She did it without having to think about her options for a long time. I also wish I had her bravery. It is a death threatening situation and she didn't let that get to her in the end. I learned that if you keep your head up and focus on the positive things and complete small goals at a time, then I can achieve the "impossible".

Why did slim say to george, "you hadda, george. i swear you hadda"? what does he mean?

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Answer:

eather meaning u had her or you had to do it

Explanation:

Which is the most UNLIKELY setting of a horror story?
(10 Points)
O an isolated road
O a bright beautiful park
O a dark basement
an old attic

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Answer:

0 a bright beutiful park

Explanation:

I beleve thats the answere because since when have we seen a HORRER MOVIE be bright and happy.  

"The doorbell rang. Mama stood and nervously smoothed her skirt. Then she pulled open the door with a mile-wide smile on her lips. "Good evening!" she said. . . .She stepped back to let the Bennetts through. Mr. Bennett came in first with a suitcase. Mrs. Bennett followed with two shopping bags and Caleb brought up the rear holding a big box." ---What is the effect of the hyperbole on the passage's meaning and tone?
A. It shows that the narrator's mother is angry.
B. It implies that the narrator's mother is exaggerating her feelings.
C. It suggests that the narrator's mother is close friends with the visitors.
D. It suggests that the narrator's mother is excited for the salesperson at the door.

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Answer:

the anwser should be d please mark brainlest

Answer:

The answer is C because it shows that she I letting people in with a suitcase and their son most likely or her son

PLEASE HELP ASAP
Through my binoculars, I viewed a group of wild animals in action. A pride of lions was sleeping when a small, yellow bus pulled up beside them. Tourists on a safari were packed into the bus like sardines in a can. Armed with cameras, they invaded the lions' territory, hoping to capture the perfect photograph. The crowd leaned out the windows, hooting and hollering, until the lions awoke. When the lions moved away, the bus rolled after them, relentlessly stalking the pride. One of the lions turned and roared to protect the young. This was greeted with cheers and a celebratory honk of the bus horn. The curious visitors observed the lions' routine for an hour before moving on. Leaving a cloud of dust, the bus headed away, taking the wild animals off to disturb someone else's home.

Review the following line from the text:

Armed with cameras and cell phones, they were invading the lions' territory in hopes of capturing the perfect photograph.

The author uses several verbs to describe the tourists' actions. The connotative tone of these verbs implies that the photographers are (5 points)

a
hunters
b
reporters
c
scientists
d
students

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

This is because they said "with cameras and cell phones" and ïn hope of capturing the perfect photograph" I'm really sorry if this is wrong but from what I got from it this should be the answer

Pick an NBA team and write a brief team history (200 words): brainliest if correct

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Answer:

the spurs

Explanation:

The spurs are a texas team from the west. They are in my opinion the best team! They have won over 5 championships the newset one being in 2014. They have many valuble players such as DeMar DeRozan, LaMarcus Aldridge, and Rudy Gay. The spurs actully made the playoffs this year! In 42 seasons since joining the NBA, the Spurs have achieved a winning record 36 times, have appeared in the NBA playoffs 38 times, and have won five NBA Championships.

u said breif team history- but i hoped this helpeddddddddddddddddddd

Salaries are more commonly associated with:
A. careers.
B. jobs.
C. college degrees.
D. vocational education.

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A is the correct answer your welcome

mot commonly associated with careers because careeers are jobs and with jobs you get salaries (or moneyyyyy)

Central idea for the article “take it out, fight it out”

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Answer:

Dude why two man

Explanation: but 56 is equivalent to 76

In what year did the winter X games start requiring that all com Patores wear helmets 2011 2010 2009 2008

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Answer:

The X games start requiring that all com Patores wear helemts in 2009..

Explanation:

How does the blizzard in “Zlateh the Goat” move the plot forward?

A) it causes Aaron’s family to become ill and rely on him to make money.

B) it causes Aaron to run out of suitable food.

C) it causes Aaron and Zlateh to form a bond that will never be broken.

D) it causes Zlateh to run away and find warmer weather.

I’ll give brainliest to the person that is correct and first!!

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Answer:

The answer is c it causes Aaron and Zlateh to for a bond that will never be broken.

Explanation: I took the test and reviewed it after and saw that the answer is c

what was the strange thing about the narrator in I never forget a face?

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Answer:

It is the summarry here

Explanation:

The “I” in the story is a businessman with a weird ability of remembering faces but not the names of people. Once he saw a face, he never forgets them. This strange capability both helped him and got him into trouble. One day, he was late from work and was traveling back home in a train later than usual. It was then he saw a man get in from London. One look at him and the author knew that the man was from Bardfield like him although he didn’t know where he had seen his face there.

The train was quite crowded and the author smiled at the gentleman who returned it to him. However, their carriage soon became empty leaving only the two of them behind. The author tried to make conversation with him in many ways including about a business deal that he had made that morning. However, the man talked very little and soon the author gave up on him. Once, when he looked up at the man from his newspaper, the author found the man asleep.

When they reached their station, the author woke up his co-passenger and they walked outside the station. As it was dark and rainy, the author offered to drop the man home in his car if it was on the route that he took. The man thanked him and they resumed their journey together with the man remaining silent.

Half way through when they were at a deserted spot, the man said that he would get down there. The author thought that he was crazy but slowed down anyway. Suddenly, he felt a sharp blow on his head and he fell unconscious. He vaguely remembered being pulled out of his car. When the author regained consciousness, he had a bad headache and he found himself robbed of his car, wallet, umbrella and watch. Slowly, he made his way by foot to Bardfield and to the police station there.

When he reached the police station, the author remembered who the person was. There was a lookout notice posted on the wall that the author had seen daily for a week. The man was John and he was accused of robbery with violence and murder attempts. Once again, remembering just the face and not the name had landed the author in trouble.

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What is the purpose for including a graph in an informational text?


To provide data in paragraph form


To use text and images to explain technical processes


To encourage the reader to explore other, related texts


To provide the reader with a quick and visual way to analyze data

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Answer:

To provide the reader with a quick and visual way to analyze data

Explanation:

A graph is a type of diagram used to show the relation between variable quantities. There are several kinds of graphs, for example:

Line graph - illustrates how related data changes with time.Bar graph - used to show categorical data with rectangular bars with heights proportional to the values they represent..Pictograph -  a representation of data using images. Histogram -  a graphical display of numerical data using bars of different heights.Area graph - a graph based on the line graph but with the area below the line filled in with a certain color or texture.Scatter plot - a graph that uses dots to represent values for two different numeric variables

The purpose of graphs in informational texts is to allow the reader to analyze data more easily and quickly. Visual content stands out more when it's surrounded by text, and sometimes it's impossible to quickly analyze data without these visual elements.

Answer:

To provide the reader with a quick and visual way to analyze data

Explanation:

I do k12 and got an A.

Waverly recalls I said in a small voice that I didn't want to play in the local tournament. They would have American rules. If I lost, I would bring shame on my family, How does this message convince her mother to agree to the tournament? A) Waverly challenge her mother's knowledge about the local culture. B) Waverly tricks her mother into feeling ashamed of her family. C) Waverly questions her Mother's dedication to the family. D) Waverly brings out her Mother's pride in her heritage. ​

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Answer:

D) Waverly brings out her Mother's pride in her heritage. ​

Explanation:

According to the book Rules of the Game, Waverly tricks her mother into letting her enroll at the local chess tournament by subtly suggesting that she didn't want to play because it would be American rules, which made her mother to allow her compete because she beings out her Mother's pride in her heritage.

Read the excerpt from "The Cat and the Moon."

The cat went here and there
And the moon spun round like a top,
And the nearest kin of the moon,
The creeping cat, looked up.
What is the meaning of the figurative language in line 2?

A. The moon is making the cat dizzy.
B. The moon is spinning on its axis.
C. The moon appears to be changing.
D. The moon is circling around the stars.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Its B because the second line is describing what the moon was doing and how it was doing it. It is not describing in that line that it is making the cat dizzy, it is not describing how the moon is changing and in that line it says nothing about the stars. So therefore the answer is B

The answer is C. i took the test and it said C was right.

List some things in alexie's life that made a love of reading difficult to sustain. Consider things that worked against his learning and growth?

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Answer:

Some of the things that made Alexie's love of reading difficult to sustain were poverty, social pressure, and lack of support at school.

Explanation:

The given question refers to the essay Superman and Me written by novelist Sherman Alexie.  Alexie tells us about how he grew up in a family that struggled financially. His father loved to read, but new books weren't something they could afford. That's why Alexie grew up with books his father managed to get from the pawnshop, Goodwill, or by borrowing books from others. He didn't get to read books for children.

Another thing that made it difficult for Alexie was social pressure. He is Indian, and according to him, Indians weren't expected to excel at school, especially compared to other, non-Indian children. That's why we can say that he also lacked support at school.

This software application can be used to create letters, reports, and brochures.

Excel
OneNote
PowerPoint
Word

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Answer:

Microsoft Word

Explanation:

Most obvious one :)

Answer:

word

Explanation:

Words to describe a leader?

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Answer:

A leader is someone who can see how things can be improved and who rallies people to move toward that better vision. Leaders can work toward making their vision a reality while putting people first. Just being able to motivate people isn't enough — leaders need to be empathetic and connect with people to be successful.

(I'm not going to give any big details out, BUT) here are some big important, words to describe a leader: passionate, honest, respectful, self motivated, and positivity.

Please help me with this!!!



Write a rhetorical analysis that explains how Teresa M. Bejan uses definition strategies to support her definition of free speech. Write an essay that analyzes the author's use of a rhetorical device ( classificationexemplification , functionor negation) Be sure to Include a topic sentence that states the rhetorical device Provide textual evidence for support Describe the effect the author achieves with the use of that thetorical device



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Answer

It provides a specific example of a rhetorical strategy and explains how that strategy supports the thesis.

Explanation:

Took the test hope it helps

define”graph” as a verb

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Answer:

transitive verb. 1 : to represent by a graph. 2 : to plot on a graph. graph.

Read the passage below and answer the question.


"If thine enemy be hungry, give him bread to eat, and if he be thirsty, give him water to drink; for thou shalt heap coals of fire upon his head, and the Lord shall reward thee."

Besides the archaic pronoun thou , which other pronoun in the passage is in the nominative case?


nominative case pronoun: ?
objective case pronoun: ?

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Answer: he

Explanation:

Read the excerpt from Act I, scene ii of Romeo and Juliet. Servant: God gi’ good den. I pray, sir, can you read? 55 Romeo: Ay, mine own fortune in my misery. Servant: Perhaps you have learn’d it without book: but, I pray, can you read any thing you see? Romeo: Ay, if I know the letters and the language. Servant: Ye say honestly; rest you merry! [Offering to go.] Romeo: Stay, fellow; I can read. What causes the servant to ask for Romeo’s help? The servant needs directions. The servant cannot see. The servant needs to pray. The servant cannot read.

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Answer:

The servant cannot read.

Explanation:

William Shakespeare's "Romeo and Ju liet" revolves around the tragic love story of two "star-crossed" lovers stuck in a secret that eventually led to their deaths. The play delves into the theme of romantic love that is violent, overpowering everything including one's loyalty and emotions.

In the given dialogue between the servant from the Capulets and Romeo, we can know that the servant is looking for someone to read the list of names he was given for the party at his master's house. His assertion that he needs someone who can read, and continuously asking Romeo "can you read? [. . .] can you read anything you see?" clearly suggests that he cannot read what he holds in his hand.

Thus, the correct answer is the fourth option.

Answer:

d. is the right answer

Explanation:

Which function of communication is
served when people's feelings are
being invoked *​

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Answer:

Emotional Expression

Explanation:

Feelings being invoked expresses people's feelings.

Which one is correct?
A)They are like birds.
B)They are like a bird.
C)A and B are both correct.

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Answer:

B is correct.............

which is the linking verb in the sentence When I taste something spicy, I feel uncomfortable.

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Answer:

The linking verbs used within the sentence are taste, and feel.

Explanation:

These verbs allow the two separate clauses within the sentence to become linked through connected verbs which associate the actions within the sentence with one another.

What is the connection that Miller makes between politics, morality, and religion?

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Answer:

John Stuart Mill (1806–1873) was the most famous and influential British philosopher of the nineteenth century. He was one of the last systematic philosophers, making significant contributions in logic, metaphysics, epistemology, ethics, political philosophy, and social theory. He was also an important public figure, articulating the liberal platform, pressing for various liberal reforms, and serving in Parliament. During Mill’s lifetime, he was most widely admired for his work in theoretical philosophy and political economy. However, nowadays Mill’s greatest philosophical influence is in moral and political philosophy, especially his articulation and defense of utilitarianism and liberalism (Nicholson 1998). This entry will examine Mill’s contributions to the utilitarian and liberal traditions. We will concentrate on his two most popular and best known works, Utilitarianism (1861, cited as U) and On Liberty (1859, cited as OL), drawing on other texts when this sheds light on his utilitarian and liberal principles. We will conclude by looking at how Mill applies these principles to issues of political and sexual equality in Considerations on Representative Government (1859, cited as CRG), Principles of Political Economy (1848, cited as PPE), and The Subjection of Women (1869, cited as SW).

I think.................

Explanation:

What does Mexico harvest during October

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Answer:

cotton

Explanation:

Harvest Portfolios Group Inc. ("Harvest") announces the following distributions for Harvest ETF's for the month ending October 31, 2020. The distribution will be paid on or about November 9, 2020 to unitholders of record on October 30, 2020 with an ex-dividend date of October 29, 2020.

The Lincoln-Douglas Debates:

6. Vocabulary: Analyze Word Choices

Analyzethe quotes from the Lincoln-Douglas

debates. Choose one phrase that would

have been especially appealing to voters at

the time and explain why.

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Answer:

Many of the debates between Abraham Lincoln and Stephen Douglas revolved around the subject of slavery.

Abraham Lincoln was very diplomatic about the subject regardless of his personal beliefs.

For instance, he was quoted to severally taken a stand against anything that would result in a fracas between the free and slave states.

In taking this stand, he was saying America should be viewed as free land for all. What he didn't say by that statement is that slaves should be emancipated.

This position was acceptable to the feudal lords whose wealth rested on the shoulders of slaves and to the slaves, it was a welcome development if there was going to be a president that was at least concerned that they should have the freedom to exist and be treated as humans.

Corroborating the above position, Lincoln was also of the mindset that slaves were humans and that according to the position of the declaration of independence were entitled to the fundamental right to “life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness".

In taking the above position, Lincoln also was not campaigning for slaves to be offered citizenship but that they should be treated as free. Again this position was appealing to the White Supremacists and the blacks. It was middle-ground enough at that time.

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what is the central idea and supporting evidence of the book of Azreca,Incas ans Mayans: The aztec Empire

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Do you have the article ? Then I could tell you

What’s the answer to this question

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Answer: having finally arrived in the town , we went to get something to eat.

Explanation:

What does a media-literate person recognize about the media?
A. Media outlets are all attempting to control the minds of their
audiences.
B. Media messages are the only way people receive information.
C. The producers of media have goals they want their messages to
achieve.
D. People today can only get information from the mass media.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

C is the only logical statement. Although the understanding of this is uncommon today sadly, media companies are still corporations at the end of the day. The producer has a goal that the messages they send out are trying to achieve. These goals can be in the interest of the public or they may not be, but either way there are goals involved in media

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