Hi there, can you just read this. Its for a English competition, can you rate it and tell me about it please.
I heavily pushed the wooden cinnamon colour door open as it screeched on the reeking dusty floor, leaving scraped marks. My blonde hair strands flowed around amid the unfocused lightened landscape, I tightened my toes to the grass, clenched my hair and brushed it out of my face, sighing ecstatically. I waved to my sister and ran off to collect wood. I looked around as animals cluttered around me, getting on with their daily routines. robins chirping, rabbits scurrying, squirrels squeaking and stealing acorns from oak trees, the hedgehog yields a yorn, buttercups, roses, lily pads, “OOOOWWWW ”. I fell...But.. before I helped myself get up, I stopped; My heart dropped to my stomach and my brain tingled as my body seared in anxiety. I felt something coiling around me. His hand reached out. His skin was black. Bleach black as if it was painted, his left eye blue and the other yellow. He pulled me up and asked if I was okay. “ I'm okay, thanks ''. He gave an amiable aura though he gave a diabolical feeling at the same time. “A snake”. He wore gold accessories, ripped black pants and tall. But I saw the exposed lacerated wounded maims that had stained him. He was about to leave but I got a strong grip of his hand. “what's your name? ”. He looked at me bluntly before answering “ kuzan.” The atmosphere got awkward fast especially when I'm still smiling at a statue, frozen to death. “What's up?,are you okay?, are you hurt? Do you need medicine??” he asked. “No, but where are you going?” “Home”. Home? I thought it was only me and Kiji that was living here… “ummm, would you like to come with me?”

I stepped on a blanket formed from velvet blossom petals, which blanketed the sandy ground; a thin branch of blossoms lingering on the tip of my rosie nose, the pink tip bleeding towards the centre to the white. I got disturbed by a noisy crowd. A boy was fighting a tiger but he didn't seem to be doing much, rather just standing there, his boney feet clenched to the ground, indigo black swollen bruises, blood slithering down the side of his face, but he had a menacing expression. The tiger recedes back and forcefully jumps on his petite peachy body, and his body hammers to the ground. Slowly. I wondered why the situation was unattended, inexplicabley, the rare tiger glanced at Kuzan with his tyrannical, malice eyes. “I heard that dense supervisor secretly connived the kid and gave consent to fight the tiger!”. They're gonna make an example of the kid!”. There was another body laying beside him. Blood draining from his ripped hand, eyes bulging out, drooling saliva, and he was laid on a crimson bed of blood, he seemed to be in a desparable blaze of agony. “He's no dead than a stuck pig ” someone mocked. Everyone glared the boy like he was being brusque for not fighting back that tiger. “welcome to Esano?..”

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Answer 1

Answer:

wow

Explanation:

thats good. But did you change the subject? or did he bring her to the past/future for the second part? If he did you should add ✯✯✯✯ and then put the paragraph.


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Fill in the blanks.

Word Bank: ready, weather, stood, length, object

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Explanation:

I stood still for the length of the entire trail just so that I could hear the lawyer shout "I object".

Answer: hewo

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Which of the following lines by Juliet foreshadows the end of the play?
Do thou but call my resolution wise,
And with this knife I'll help it presently
Unless thou tell me how I may prevent it:
Could to no issue of true honour bring.

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Could to no issue of true honour bring

How can pictures/videos help students with middle school?

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Answer:

By giving them a visual represtentation of what their learning to help them understand better.

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HELP!! I NEED AN IDEA ABOUT WHAT TO WRITE MY SPRING ARTICLE ON FOR MY SCHOOL NEWSPAPER, THIS HELPS UP MY GPA, AND I JUST NEED A SUBJECT. IT NEEDS TO BE BIG, SOMETHING THAT REALLY MATTERS!!! JUST PUT THE IDEA, AND ANY FACTS YOU WANT TO, AND ILL DO MORE RESEARCH

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Answer:

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Explanation:

What about species that are popular that are going extinct or some that will go extinct because of certian resons

Could end up being really impactfull hope this helps!

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12. Mark all that are TRUE for "The Metamorphosis". (Check all that apply)
A) It contains no symbolism.
B) It mixes reality and imagination in an attempt to capture the realities of life.
C) This short story also expresses a sense of uncertainty and alienation, leaving readers to draw their own conclusions.
D) Relationships and isolation are two themes that are found.

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Answer: If it isn't multiple choice, the answer should be C! Hope this helps!

Which of these would best show that HA Schult's art raises awareness about the environment? A. Quotations from people who have seen the art B. Tips on how people can produce less trash C. A map of all the places where the art has been D. Facts about trash problems in the environment.


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Answer:

b

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What is Christa's attitude towards preparing for the doubles match with Carmelita (edmentum)

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Answer:

She is uninterested in practicing with Carmelita.

Explanation:

I got it right, hope this helps :)

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how did losing the senate race in 1858 help lincoln most?

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Lincoln said:

"I am glad I made the late race. It gave me a hearing on the great and durable questions of the age, which I could have had in no other way; and though I now sink out of view, and shall be forgotten, I believe I have made some marks which will tell for the cause of civil liberty long after I am gone."

-Lincoln After Losing 1858 Senate Race

Hello, please help me!

Rewrite this passage so that it includes at least one compound, complex, or compound-complex sentence.

You should not get up. You should not make dinner. You think you feel fine. You need to stay in bed. You are sick. You need to give your body a chance to get well. You will only get better with rest.

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Answer: You should not get out of bed you are very sick. You should not make dinner even though you think you feel fine. You need to give your body a chance to get well because you can only get better with rest.

Explanation: Just add conjunctions and combine sentences.

Abby tends to avoid conformity. She also demonstrates originality and has an overall genuine

character. Which of these characteristics does Abby possess?

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Answer: authenticity

Explanation:

Based on the information given, the characteristics possessed by Abby is authenticity.

Authenticity simply means for one to represent his or her true beliefs and being real to oneself. Someone who's authentic will act accordingly based on their values and won't act just to please other people.

Since Abby demonstrates originality and has an overall genuine

character, she's authentic.

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Answer:

1. (proper nouns) Jean Jones/ (common nouns) course

2. (proper) none/ (common) limousine, driveway

3. Brad Simpson/ officer, traffic, street

4. Miss Sacks/ committee

5. none/ alligator, hippopotamus, residents, zoo

6. Louvre, Paris/ museum, palace

7. Spanish/ algebra, history, year

8. Sacramento Bee/ speech

9. England, Germany, Australia/ people, eclipse

10. Sally, Sean, Sarah/ members, family

Explanation:

Common nouns name any person, place, thing, or idea. They are not capitalized unless they come at the beginning of a sentence. Proper nouns are the names of specific people, places, things, or ideas. Proper nouns should always be capitalized. I hope this helped!

Common  Proper

boy ⇒ James

river ⇒ Mississippi River

car ⇒ Ford

doctor ⇒ Doctor Jefferson

town ⇒ Rockledge

candy bar ⇒ Baby Ruth

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24 points!!!!!!!!!!
Which of these short passages uses direct characterization? A. Anne rang the hotel desk. "I am really sorry for calling so late in the night, but could you send someone over to pick up the laundry in Room 202?" B. The moment Sue walked into the hall, all eyes turned to her. Her face was radiant and her eyes sparkled with mischief. She had let her hair loose and was wearing a beautiful satin dress. C. "Why do you always have to argue with me?" James asked. His wife replied that she wouldn't have to if he thought things through once in a while. D. Mary unwillingly started picking up the clothes lying on the floor. A short while later, her mother walked in to see a half-filled laundry basket on the floor. Mary was lying on her bed listening to music.

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The answer is D Forsure.

Explanation: because anne rang asked could you send someone to pick up the laundry and when you look at the answer D you’ll realize it matches the description Anne asked it, which said Mary unwilling started picking up the clothes laying on the floor etx so the answer is D makes sense the other answer to transfer to what the person in the beginning asked hope this helped.

How is the meaning of the word luscious different from that of delicious?

A.)Luscious describes only dessert, but delicious describes any food or drink.

B.)Luscious implies a more pleasant, richer, or sweeter taste than delicious.

C.)Luscious food is less flavorful than delicious food.

D.)Luscious suggests indulgence, while delicious suggests something bland.

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B) is the correct answer i’m pretty sure

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its B. Luscious implies a more pleasant, richer, or sweeter taste than delicious.

Knowledge of Words 9:Question 8
Which pair of words shows a transition from an adjective to an
adverb?
Select one:
O
Draw/drawing
Fast/faster.
Able/ably.
Run/runs.

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able/ably is the correct one

Pls help on both illl give brainly

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Answer:

1 is a 2 is d because dismantled means took apart and uninhabited means not lived in

stalk

n.

1. the stem of a plant

2. a slender support of any thing, plant, or animal

v.

1. to pursue or hunt, usually secretively

2. to walk with long, stiff strides

Which sentence correctly uses the word stalk according to the first verb definition?

The arrogant major began to stalk before his troops, looking for any fault in their uniforms.


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The stalk was so delicate that the slightest wind would snap it in two.

The crane's long leg looked like a thin black stalk against the newly fallen snow.

Adam was so jealous of Andrea's having other friends that he would stalk her when she went shopping with Lilly.

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Answer:

Adam was so jealous of Andrea's having other friends that he would stalk her when she went shopping with Lilly.

Explanation:

Adam was "pursuing or hunting" Lilly secretively.

Answer:

Adam was so jealous of Andrea's having other friends that he would stalk her when she went shopping with Lilly.

Explanation:

how does the author's evidence supports the theme.

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Answer:

where  is the attachment or story...or passage...

Explanation:

The groom looked ________ when his bride began yelling furiously at the wedding planner.

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Answer:

11

Explanation:yes a

OK PLS TELL ME........

whats it like?
being in love?

boys describe her as best as you can.
girls describe him
non binarys describe them.
tell me about them

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When you have that special person. It makes you feel any type of emotion. You try your best to love that person but sometimes you fail them. And you regret that. But you always keep going and going because you know that you will always love that person and also because you don’t want to lose that person at all.

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He's tall, He's strong, He plays football. I cant wait to do something with him. He's literally the only thing I wanna talk about now.  its like you found that other half of you like a bestfriend but its not your bestfriend its a bigger half of you. Hes my everything<3 I honestly didnt think I would get a bf because pfft i always felt ugIy. Im always being put down but hes there and hes like "Your my everything" and that just makes me happy. We could stay up all night long if we didnt get tired. I want him and only him. and even sometimes i feel like I did something wrong but he always trys to love me and he does. we dont give up. Hes my everything but i don't know if im his everything. I guess time will tell! But its the best feeling. if yall BOTH love each other then yeah its a good feeling. but i can tell when people, be lyin to me. and sometimes its hard to love someone when your mad at them. but when you lose the person..its hurts. it feels like someone is ripping that part away from u which they are. you will cry a lot, you might even go into depression but if you dont cry im just saying you prob didnt love him/her as much as you said you did. You will know your in love as soon as you get in the room as the person. You will just know it some how its like a magic. :) but trust me please dont get connected quick because it just hurts even more at the end of it all.

Hope this answers your question!

Why use more than one kind of source in a presentation?

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It would show that you didn't just read something from one source and believed it. When researching it is good to read around and see different results or if the information may be the close to what you gathered elswhere etc.

Answer:

So that you can collect all kinds of different information and/or opinions/outlooks of/on a topic,, basically what BritneyCI said in just adding on

How does the use of this word impact the remainder of the text? It foreshadows the revelation that the Gorgons could turn people to stone

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Hello. Your question is incomplete, which makes it impossible for it to be answered. However, I will try to help you in the best possible way.

If the word, to which your question refers, is capable of foreshadowing something, it means that that word is advancing very important information about the plot in a subjunctive way, with the aim of promoting anxiety in the reader, stimulating curiosity, which will keep and will optimize reading.

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Answer:The first constructed in 1961, the wall was the Cold War's most tangible symbol of communism and demarcation of the Iron Curtain. ... Professor Harrison: The wall symbolized the lack of freedom under communism. It symbolized the Cold War and divide between the communist Soviet bloc and the western democratic, capitalist bloc.

Explanation:

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

what is opportunity???​

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Answer:

a good chance for advancement or progress

-Grade 8 ELARIPAP FISD

English

In the poem "To Live." how do the lines my mind plus my life equals something beyond this support the theme than

life can get in the way of figuring out who you really are?

They show the confusion the speaker feels about life.

They show that the speaker feels more important than everyday life situations

They illustrate exactly how trapped the speaker feels by school

They illustrate what the speaker's real goals in life are.

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Answer:

They show the speaker feels more important than every day situations.

Explanation:

The poem "To Live" demonstrates the idea that there exist several layers of personal identity. In the poem, the poet is exposed to two cultures in her life. Both the cultures has significant effect on her thoughts and life. To specify and distinguish her identity, the poet finds herself trapped amongst the serval distractions. She continuous her search of self identity and know her place in the world.

Paraphrase "Ithaka" Soon as possible please

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Answer:

Understandle have a nice day.

Explanation:

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Answer:

i didnt do this but the words u highlited

can be a summary but add a litile more words

4- If you could change only one characteristic of Gatsby's character, what would
you change? why?

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If I could change only one characteristic of Gatsby's character, it would be inflexibility, because that is what prevents him from achieving his goals in the end.

Explanation:

In F. Scott Fitzgerald's "The Great Gatsby", Jay Gatsby seems to have it all. He owns a mansion that looks like a castle, throws grand parties to hundreds of people every week, drives fancy and fast cars, etc. But what he wants the most is to have the love of his life by his side, Daisy. The problem is that Daisy is already married. They do have an affair, but Gatsby wants more. He wants Daisy to act as if her marriage, husband, and daughter never existed. He wants to ask her parents for their blessing and marry her, as he has dreamed and pictured over and over again.

However, there is a limit to what Daisy can and is willing to do. She cannot erase the past. She cannot pretend to have never been married. At a certain point in the story, they argue because she wants to run away with him, leave it all behind, but he does not. He wants to marry her. It is this inflexibility of his that costs them their dream. Had Gatsby accepted reality, taken Daisy's proposal to run away, and simply left with her, they could have been together, happily. But his insistence in doing things a certain way ends up ruining their affair and, tragically, even getting him killed.

What is the dramatic irony in this passage? The audience knows that Nora and Doctor Rank are having an affair, but Nora denies it. O The audience knows that Mrs. Linde is jealous of Nora, but Nora does not know this. The audience knows that Krogstad loaned Nora money, but Mrs. Linde does not know this. 0 The audience knows that Doctor Rank loaned Nora money, but Nora denies this.​

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Answer:

C. The audience knows that Krogstad loaned Nora money, but Mrs. Linde does not know this.

Explanation:

It's self explanatory, and correct on edge. Please mark brainliest, I'm trying to get to the next level.

The statement that shows dramatic irony is The audience knows that Krogstad loaned Nora money, but Mrs. Linde does not know this. Thus, option C is the correct answer.

What is dramatic irony?

This is a theatrical technique in which the actions and intentions of a character are known to the audience but not to the other characters in the performance. It is originally used in Greek tragedy.  Dramatic irony is often the result of a story having shifting perspectives or a character being absent from a scene or chapter that reveals important information to the audience.

Nora had taken loan from Krogstad and the audience knew this because they could see what other characters could not.

Mrs. Linde  was a character and so did not know that Krogstad loaned Nora money. This, therefore shows dramatic irony.

In conclusion, option C is the dramatic irony in this passage.

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Which word best describes the mood of the third stanza: "A cicada sends / its sawing song / high into the empty air"?
A. Happy
B. Ominous
C. Eager
D. Lonely
please help me

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C, High into the air gives a tone that makes it sound eager that it is jumping up into the air
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